Friday 22 November 2019

The Ancient Volcano.

WALT develop our own poem in response to a model ( packing my bag for…. By James Norelifle).

WALT use an increasingly descriptive vocabulary to add interest to our writing.

WALT have some fun and be creative with ideas and imagination 




The ancient volcano.

It is the time of two thousand and fifty. I flew to an ancient volcano in the united states of america (the biggest volcano in the world) in my helicopter. I wasn’t meant to land in the united states I was meant to land in Los Angeles but I had to make a crash landing because something went wrong with the engine. When I hopped out of my helicopter I put my gas mask and my heat protection suit on so that I don’t get poisoned because of the poisonous air and the burning heat. There was smoke everywhere. I coughed as I inhaled the smoke. The sky was grey and there were bits of hot ashes all over the ground from the volcano. As I looked up I could see the gigantic volcano right in front of me. I looked over my shoulder and I saw a village of abandoned houses, some of them were burnt to ash. In the distance I saw a graveyard I couldn’t quite make out what was standing outside of it, but as I got closer I realised that they were zombies. GASP!!!   

I am going to take….


One large gold and silver steel gas mask 
With transparent glass eye holes
To see through cloudy ash filled air
And provide fresh cool oxygen

To be able to explore the volcano insides.



One large silky and soft protection suit.
With heat protected metal
And with wool sewed on the inside 
To protect me from the burning heat

Incase the heat gets unbearable.



One medium size shotgun
Loaded with 4 steel capped, tiny lace winged bullet shells
Include seven spare bullet shells
To protect myself


In case zombies invade the volcano.



One small size 2k diamond camera
With 50 diamond films 
With a 20 inch clear transparent screen
To see out of when I take a picture

In case there is a great sight to take a picture of.  





And of course my best friend

To keep me company.

                     

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