Hi Hannah this is Jordyn from Karoro school I like the part when you tell us about your favourite part or the story. Maybe you should tell us what you found interesting the most.
Hi Hannah, I am Billie from karoro school. I like your drawing as it was interesting to read. I read it too and found that the birds fly from Alaska to New Zealand. Next time you could have a lighter background. From Billie.
Hi Hannah this is Jordyn from Karoro school I like the part when you tell us about your favourite part or the story. Maybe you should tell us what you found interesting the most.
ReplyDeleteHi Hannah, I am Billie from karoro school. I like your drawing as it was interesting to read. I read it too and found that the birds fly from Alaska to New Zealand. Next time you could have a lighter background. From Billie.
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